I gasp as my body curls toward Brennus like a flower to the sun, for the pleasure of it. He holds me close to him. His nose grazes the length of my neck. He breathes me in. I feel the roar and rush of my heartbeat. I’m his toy; his energy streams into me. He winds the invisible key in my back and the euphoria ratchets and coils inside of me: tick…tick…tick…
Another wicked surge of energy flows from him into me. Pain. Pleasure. Bliss. My jaw unclenches as my lips part. I make a small, breathy sound as we dance. Brennus responds with something close to a growl. “Ye’re killing me, mo chroí,” he murmurs. His hand moves down my back infusing me with a golden glow of power. My wings punch violently from me, tearing a hole in my day dress. They spread wide, like a red stain beyond my pale skin. I’m dancing now for the thrill of it. I follow his lead.
As the song comes to an end, Brennus kisses my throat. He whispers in my ear, “When ye get back, come find me, mo chroí. I’ve healed ye…now wake up and banjax whoever banished ye here…”
Evie is a half-angel/half-human being who has mission on earth from heaven. She doesn’t know what that is but she does have help- Russel, her soulmate, Reed, her aspire (angel soulmate), Buns, Brownie, and Zypher (her family), and Brennus, her Gancanagh King. They are constantly moving and fighting with creatures, all the while Evie gets these premonitions in her dreams of things that are going to happen. Lots of love, hot guys, and yes- sex. But also lots of kick ass female characters. Evie isn’t one for cowering when life gets tuff.
So this is the 5th and final book in The Premonition Series by Amy A. Bartol. The others are Inescapable, Intuition, Indebted, and Incendiary.
Bartol has defined herself as a pantser (writes by the seat of her pants), but she has plotted this series so well. The twist and turns come when you least expect them to. Iniquity is no different. The story weaves through Evie’s past and present, finally explaining to us why she is on earth and what her heavenly mission is- to destroy her inescapable and choose a love of her own.
Bartol’s writing is as strong as ever. Lots of details. Lots of steamy scenes. Lots of action.
One thing that drives me nuts, and has nothing to do with the writing, are the male characters, specifically Brennus, Tau (Evie’s father), and Xavier (Evie’s guardian angel who was in love with her). They don’t respect what Evie wants. She’ll make a statement like “I don’t want to be with you” and they will ignore her completely. And this kept happening throughout the book. The only person who knows what is best for Evie, is Evie herself. Ugh, male egos.
Overall, I feel sort of indifferent about the book… and the ending. I was so worried the entire time that Evie, or Reed, or Brennuss, or Buns, or Russle, or Brownie, or Zypher was going to die that it took away from my focus on the story. I couldn’t care less about the fate of Tau or Xavier. And the ending was okay. Evie ending up where she belonged… they all ended up where she belonged.
I think in the end the book was lack luster. However, I enjoyed it as much as the previous ones. I could’ve used more kick ass Evie and less everyone else.
6 thoughts on “Book Review: Iniquity by Amy A. Bartol”
I totally agree about the book being kind of lack luster. I’m still not sure about my complete thoughts about it. I didn’t really like the ending. It felt just eh. The way it ended made me think that we could have had the same ending a couple of books ago. I did however like how Evie got her past life memories back.
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Yeah with the information given to us, this series could’ve ended with book three or four. To be honest, I feel like Emil and the whole thing was a kind of cop out… 😐 but still did like it. I read her other books this summer, so at least I didn’t have to wait two years for the last book. I actually think Evie being the fairey queen is more interesting than Emil.
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Yes! I wasn’t a big fan of the Emil story either. I loved Evie being Queen of the Faeries. I’m totally Team Brennus so I almost wish Reed wasn’t brought back. Especially since the Gancanagh got their souls back.
Yeah I feel like it Reed hadn’t been brought back Evie could’ve moved on and been with Brennus. I’m all about Brennus.
I love Xavier! I just don’t like the accent Brennus had! But Reed…… I like him but I like Xavier better!
NO WAY EVIE BELONGS WITH REED!!!!!